Anyone out there who is a good writer and willing to read over this short paragraph for me?

The most incomparable feeling is completing my final exam on that last day of school before summer vacation. The exact moment when the bell rings generates an ecstatic feeling of freedom that pours over me. In the initial two months of my vacation, my summer included relaxing by the pool, parties with friends, and a seemingly endless amount of leisure time. The next thing I knew, it was the end of July and cheer tryouts were approaching right around the corner.